itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hammi - Silent Killer]

A good start!

The switch to Reason was a good one. But start using Reason with Fruity Loops with ReWire, you might learn a trick or two that way.

-The beginning tricked me. I though you put no effort into this, but then you break out with this awesome pad synth and then drumbeats. You let it down too much when you took out the drumbeat. Don't be afraid to add more stuff. Take a risk, and fly!

-Good try, and keep working at it. You'll get there!

-SuperDrummer146

Check my newest song!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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Hammi responds:

Thanx man, that was a constructive review! Really good. Im glad you liked it :)

Ill check out your songs alright ^_^

-Hammi

[Zenons Anthem--_--(1:41)]

Alright.

Your music rises above the norm time and time again. Everything about this song was good. But for 10-15 minutes to put this together, this really shows that kind of effort in the feeling you put into it. You said that this was your anthem, but I don't think you meant it. It's like I couldn't hear what you were trying to say. I didn't hear "I'M ZENON!!!". I heard "Oh, hey, I'm zenon...yeah..."

-Your on the right track but you need to break on through to the other side, and towards the end, just break loose and shout it out. Shout out your anthem. Don't just say it. SHOUT IT!

-Overall, I like this and totally respect your music making abilities. They are awesome. But you've had better feeling to a song than this. Keep at it, you're really ahead of the game!

-SuperDrummer146

Check it!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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My newest song.

PERVOK responds:

I'll drop you the review tonight.

BTW, thank you for a partially detailed review. The only thing that is worrying me about my music nowadays is that I'm losing my style... my glitchy, raw sounding style and its getting more cliche and professional sounding, and thst really not what I want.

If you listen to my song 'Torn', thats the style I need to get myself back into. Its just a matter of a bit of thinking and making a few songs like that though.

So, the review you gave me wasn't exactly nessecary, seeing as I just called it 'Zenons Anthem' because it was a dutch trance/anthem trance song XD and I also made it to test if we could submit to the AP again.

Thank you for the review, old chap!

[DJ Zendai vs. Djipe - Ruthless]

Decent submission!

This is better than a lot of the stuff that usually comes around. This is good, but the song is way too empty, it just seems like only a beat, a little spice, but that seems to be it. Just keep adding stuff into the mix until you feel that it doesn't taste good. Simple can be good, but this isn't that kinda song. Techno isn't meant to be extremely simple to the bare bones.

-You're definitely on to something, so keep at it. You're on the right track!

-SuperDrummer146

-Check out my stuff!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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Yytrium responds:

Thanks for this useful review. I have always made "empty" tracks. I guess it's a bad habbit I can't get rid of, yet... I'll write some reviews for you when I have time...

Check out my other stuff too.

[Pa Romperte La Ropa]

Sweet!

Catchy, a little too stereotypical with the message of the song, but either way, have no fear, this is a freakin' awesome loop. The beat is slightly overused, but the clarity was great. Keep workin' at it, it's not bad, but it's not all the way there yet.

Check my stuff out!

-SuperDrummer146

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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Always-Dark responds:

thnx u for giving me a little more on this review than the others, not that they were bad but u gave me more. thnx again

-Allen

[-Orr-A Hero Reborn]

Fivend!

Because you're an awesome artist, and that's what this piece deserves.

All the Awesome stuff!

-The intro just amazes me with the mysterious, yet open, and happy feel to it. You might not know everything, but you still feel okay anyways. Cool feeling.

-The song builds off that, and the mood changes to you knowing everything, and a sudden rush of joy comes. Sweet!

-You transfer to a more upbeat march, battle-like situation. You break the moment that you were once at. It's a good transfer, but more of a buildup would be smiled upon : )

-There's a pause, the hero analyzes the situation at hand. Then comes back in to rush for the kill. Nice job hero!

-Overall, this piece is proffesional, and enjoyable, and it could be in a movie!

-SuperDrummer146

-Check my newest song!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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DavidOrr responds:

Hey bud,

Glad you could hear the story I was trying to portray, you were pretty much dead on with what I had envisioned.

Off to take a look at your stuff, thanks for the review (and the link to your stuff)!

[Cryptic]

Sweet!

Rock on! I think I'll go with the crowd on the motorcycle stereotype, lol. That one guitar solo is sick! Keep extending this, it's coming in awesome.

-SuperDrummer146

-Check my newest song!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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speedmetalmessiah responds:

haha thanks man glad you like it I agree with the motorcycle thing. I'll gladly listen to your tune.

[Final Fantasy 3: Narshe (2:47)]

Hmm...

Seems kinda empty, but it's pretty catchy as well. I dunno, it's relaxing, that's what really makes this piece fun.

If you're really worried about recording/sound quality, then maybe you could directly jack into your recording system, whatever that may be, and go from there. That would make things better.

-I like it, but it's too empty to make it really nice. Maybe a counter melody in a flute-like instrument, and a pad, soft and warm i guess, just throwin' stuff out : )

-Great job!

-Fivened by SuperDrummer146

WinTang responds:

Thanks! The way of recording you describe is the way I'm using, so that didn't help :) but thanks anyway.
I can understand that you find it too empty, but it is actually what I myself like most about it. I dunno, I love all-guitar stuff and pads and the like would've turned this into something a little too easy-listening for my taste.

My two cents - after listening to this song over a 100 times - are that I should've used compression to balance out the volume of the lead, and that I should find a way to prolong the sustain.

Thanks a lot for your input. And the five. :)

[Crescimento]

Cool!

That was pretty booming for a piano piece! Fun with the strings too! You're very talented if you actually played the piano!

-I don't know what could improve this song except for just adding more, I dunno, that's your call.

-Good song dude! Check my stuff out!

-SuperDrummer146

caffeinerush responds:

I just layed on chords with sometimes 8 notes to get it that way.

It is all sequenced. I sure wish I could play piano like that, but not quite that good ;)

Will do

[_-/| A moments Peace]

Wow!!!

Very proffesional piece! Sounds very much like a beefed up music track of Age of Empire 2 or something. Either way, the music sounds very nice, and I'll have to get it on my iPod later : )

-I wish I knew enough to give you advice to get even better, but I'm not the best : P

-Great piece, check some of my stuff!

-SuperDrummer146

MaestroSegments responds:

Thanks SuperDrummer, it is enough for me to know that you enjoyed it. That in itself makes it worthwhile.

Thanks again for the review.

[Industrial Industry!]

Sweet! (get's gittery)

That sounded somthing like Industrial DnB, which obviously sounds really cool. Lot's of cool noises as well, and the beat was insane. It would be cool if this were longer, but I won't narc you to make it that way.

Cool song, check some of my stuff!

-SuperDrummer146

cornandbeans responds:

I originally made this as a loop, but then I added some other stuff and I liked it a lot better. Thanks for the review, I'll check out some of your stuff.

~cornandbeans