YAY!
Good things
-The beat came in at a nice time.
-The melody is catchy!
-Guitar is a very nice add.
I wonder where this tune comes from...
Nice man! Keep working at it. Keep adding instruments to your songs. Extra instruments fill in gaps in the song, and add flavor!
-SuperDrummer146
Well,
if I were a flash artist, I would certainly use this for a victory screen.
I wish you were a flash artist. heh.
Umm...
Dude, the recording has a LOT of mess ups in it, the melody chords just suck, and this song isn't going anywhere...
...sorry, I lied ; (
This song insanely rocks! You've got real piano talent, I wish I was writing Christian-based music myself, but I'm not in check to do that, I wouldn't be putting my true heart into it since I'm not right with God right now, so in short, I'm entirely messed up, so yeah.
-You've put a lot of effort into this song, great job!!!
-SuperDrummer146
-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
O man. At first I thought someone noticed the mistakes in it. haha.
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. If you aren't right with God, then get right! (yes it is that simple. *see title of song*)
Thanks alot for reviewing!
This is different...
Nice stuff
-Cool electronica feel
-Ambient feeling too
-The synths aren't cheezy
-You're obviously very good to be using such complicated rhythms, they sound very professional.
Some not so good things
-It feels too backroundy. The melody is good, but the glitchiness of it doesn't make it a solid melody. It would be in your best interest to have a melody that is easy to remember, but isn't repeated the whole time, only as needed.
-Keep adding to your song, break some rules, don't have the same thing for most of the song, vary it, make it complicated, but revert to the simplistic design as needed.
Nice first submission, it's extremely enjoyable!
-SuperDrummer146
-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
it was made on a ps1 game,this is the better i can do about the glich-sound
that's took me about 4-5 hours.
the game is MTV Music Generator.
it's easy but it's complex at the same time,but to make a long song,you gotta cut on quality...sorry
Well...
I could help yah with lyrics, maybe. I write a lot of lyrics, so it could be possible that I help. Just PM me on what you want : )
-SuperDrummer146
P.S. Check my muzik!
sweet, thanks SD146 for the review! i need female vocals bad
Hmm...
Here's your only 2 problems...
The slow strings just don't flow, they don't overlap, they flip off one note, and flip on the next note, there's a slight delay from one note to the next. Also, it doesn't have the intensity of a boss battle. The right instruments so far, but I'm not scared. This is probably some puny boss. COME ON! I want to be afraid!
-Overall: Good solid effort, keep at this piece, don't give up. Work until it's truely done : )
-SuperDrummer146
-Check my audio! I recommend Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall
Well if you want something stronger, email me at someguy142000@hotmail.com I know what you're wanting..perhaps i'll work on that..this song is more of a big powerful boss..kinda like in the final fantasy series..you see Kefka..FF3..you know he's big and bad yadda yadda..but anyway..listen to the music. thanks for the review man and i'll check out your stuff.
Wow!
Nice! You're seriously improving yourself. I've got Always In My Heart V2 and Plutonic "Harcore Beat" on my iPod, and they're good, but this is seriously you evolving to a newer level. Nice job! But don't stop. Keep raising your expectations. As soon as you get close to reaching them, set your goals higher. Keep at it man, you're really good!
-SuperDrummer146
Check my audio! I recommend "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
Thanks for listening! I'm glad to hear that my music has found a place in your iPod. :D That means a lot to me! If you want to hear the FINAL MIX of this tune, check it out at my other link: http://www.soundclick.com/xayberoptix
Thanks again for all the inspiration. OK, I'll check your tune out.
Dude!
This is a very nice piece!
Very percussive : )
Nice Middle Eastern feeling : )
Tends to be offbeat : )
Isn't very full : (
-Yeah, make the song fuller. Pauses are cool, but they need at least a bass backup to make it sound good.
Good try, you're very good!
-SuperDrummer146
Check my audio!
Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1554346&sub=569
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Fiven!
hmm... Thanks! I'll try to work on that with future pieces.
Hmm...
Nice composition : )
Great sounds : )
Ending was okay : |
I guess if you REALLY want a better ending, what would be cool is if you built the song up so intense, with lots of action, and then stopped it. And you could easily add the intense moment and just string it right onto this, and it would song extremely cool.
Kinda like this song?
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1554346&sub=569
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Hope I could help : )
-SuperDrummer146
Check my audio!
Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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Thanks for the idea. I will definitely check out your audio :).
Ya basically I'm thinking there are two options as to where the song can go. Either i can keep on building it until it gets to the climax and I have to end it or I can stop it before it peaks and then go into a softer ballad portion.
I really appreciate the review. Thanks for your time.
Hmm...strange?
Yes, this is extremely wierd, but it's a nice piece. Maybe work on your mixing and the sound FX could be more present.
Good try!
-SuperDrummer146
Check my audio!
Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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Thx! I will start to 'work' on the FX... Really. I will...!!!
Thanks for the review!!!
'KillaJo'
ImperfectDisciple-Re cording the world one track at a time.
Age 33
Drumming & Music
High School
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