Wow!
There really isn't much I can say, this is nicely done. And so professional sounding, with nice composition, and great sound FX, this piece rocks the house man! Nice job!!!
-SuperDrummer146
Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
Thank you very much ^_^
I was wondering if the SFX were misplaced or not, but I'm glad you think not :)
I'll definitely check out your audio ^_^
XD
Wow, nice submission man! I could imagine the Tankmen thinking they've got to attack these robots, but they're drunk, so they're hallucinating, and taking out their own guys, hehehe.
-Nice one man! Keep at it!
-SuperDrummer146
Hehehe, neat image :P
Thanks a lot!
NICE!!!
Wow, for just submitting to Newgrounds, I can tell you're not a n00bie at all! You've got lots of diverse sound effects, and a great composition. Your ending rocks man! You too have a serious chance at getting into a Tankman submission, me thinks. Then again, a lot of us artists have a chance, since we're all pretty good.
A couple of pointers however...
-Your crash cymbal was irregular, it didn't ring out, it just stopped. Give it some suspension or something.
-The marching sound you had in there seems to distort with the snare. I don't know how to fix that one though, sorry : (
-Nice first submission, and into a MAC6 as well!!!
-SuperDrummer146
-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
Hey SuperDrummer, thnx a lot for the review. I really appreciate your pointers, and I agree with you. When it comes to mastering I'm really kind of n00bish, so I need this kind of feedback to improve. My biggest flaw when it comes to the clarity issue, I guess is that I love the multibandcompressor.
squuuueeeeeeezz ;)
Hmm...
Not bad, but here's some pointers...
-This is DnB, as in "Drum and Bass", not Industrial. As you get better on Newgrounds, as I suspect you will, know your genres.
-The song is way too short to really be a "song", persay. Make it fuller, longer, more to it. You CAN do it, this work shows it.
-Keep it up man, you're gonna go somewhere : )
-SuperDrummer146
-P.S. Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
thanx for the reviem.I defanatly chek your
songs
WOW!
That was pretty cool man! Getting all those sound fx, and creating them, and then arranging them in such a way that they made sense, that took some work. I suggest expanding the idea though, put a soundtrack feeling behind it with some instruments, like strings and the sort, that would rock!
-Good job!
-SuperDrummer146
-Check out my music, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
thx i wanted to do seomthing different once in a while but i appreciate you liked it and yesi have been wondering about putting a soundtrack feeling :) peace buddy
Nice!
For a beginning artist, you're really coming along in the audio portal. Everything is very nice. The only thing that is somewhat skeptical is the transition from the end of the loop to the beginning, they don't really match. You'd have to bring the loop down to that point at the end of the loop so that the beginning and end flow together.
_K00Ln355!_
-SuperDrummer146
-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
Thanks i'll keep that in mind, i also reviewed your audio and it was cool.
YAY!!!
Dude, your stuff totally rocks!
Good Points
-The feeling of tanks just coming to the frontlines, ready to do damage is here. I could imagine JohnnyUtah using this as a "glory moment" ready to ruined by a friend. For example, there's the tankman running for cover from robots, and he's about to plant C4 in their base to explode, then one of his team-mates snipes him, and he's like, "YAY, I GOT ONE, YIP---wait..."
-Has your soundtrack feeling in there.
-Sounds like an easy loop, good for the flash.
-Nice percussion in the beginning.
Bad Points
-Can't really think of anything, it's just the slightest bit repetitive, but that may be it, I just can't see anything bad in this song.
Nice!
-SuperDrummer146
-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
I bet that repetitive factor came from those damn congo drums which I love so much. I also used Bongo drums, but meh, the difference between the two in this song are not distuinguishable.
I'm glad you enjoyed the piece, i'll definately check out your song ^^.
Huh what?
Minors and majors as in the chords/scales?
The four types of chords/scales are...
Major
Minor
Augmented
Diminished
If you really want to get into this, I suggest "The Complete Idiots Guide To Music Theory," 'cause it's helped me out a lot as well. Loads of info on making melodies, learning chords/scales, and loads more, it's a great book.
-Hopefully, that could help yah out : )
-SuperDrummer146
-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
Wow, that does really help me out man, thanks alot. I realllly apreciate it.
Dude...
It's only Pachbel's Canon, you really didn't make this up...
i know.. i love that song so much. lol
i had to play the solo part from it.
=)
i guess i should have mention'd that it's part of Canon.. =/
thx for the review
Hmm...
Only thing that's kinda wrong with it is that the overall quality of the song is muffled, dampened, not alive, persay? Work on that!
-Nice, I would like this as an intro to a flash then, flowing into the main menu of the movie.
-SuperDrummer146
-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
AH! ive been desperately trying to improve the quility of my audio, but i dont know how ;( ... i might been a new mic or something.. o well
sure, ill check out ur song
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