You get perfect review score...
...cause this sounds spacey, and I need something spacey for my solar system project in Earth Science, lol.
-It's a nice track, but sometimes, it kinda seems that the crash cymbals are slightly out of place. Overall, this is a very enjoyble piece, and REALLY SPACEY!
-Come check out some of my techno, and rate/review it. Have an awesome day!
-SuperDrummer146
Thanks alot,
I dont know what spacey means though, lol.
Dude!!!
Nice, I've gone through this riff on the piano before, wow! To see it in a song is pretty awesome, and for a first song, it's not bad. Of course, it will need improvement.
-First of all, the song tend to be kinda empty, like, not enough there. A giant buildup would help you build more into the song though, the the way your song is set up. Some nice counter-melodies, and other bass backrounds/effect would help to liven up the song.
-Second, for the riff you chose, it really seems that this isn't intense enough, but the diversity of each instrument is okay. Just more is needed.
-Also, in the quiet parts, really take the time to really make it powerful, heart-renching, or something, 'cause that would so make that part more emotional for the song.
-The drums are slightly generic, work on that sound.
-Well, I added in what I could. Nice job for a first song! Check out some of my techno and rate if you need some ideas : )
-SuperDrummer146
-And welcome to the Audio Portal!
Thanks for the the compliments and input. I'll be sure to keep those things in mind when I rework the song.
Oh my gosh!
This is like, something epical, wow, just really cool. It's like classical and industrial, mixed together! And you've made it such a great combo. Truely amazing how this works out. Maybe just one interlude in there would make it classic.
-Great job, come check out some of my techno mixes!
-SuperDrummer146
Alright...
Okay mix, but it needs some actual drums. I would be willing to provide though services, though it might be 'till later, like, summertime, but besides that, if you could shoot me an e-mail (it's in my profile), you could e-mail a version without drums in it, and I could add real drumset. Heck, to tell the truth, I've actually worked on the drumbeat for this song before, so I pretty much know it.
Anyways, this is a nice mix, 7/10, 5/5! Check out some of my techno songs!
-SuperDrummer146
yeh im acaully still working on it but i havnt had much time so i just uploaded what was finnished of but thx for the rev anyway good you liked it :)
Nice!
-I used this in a powerpoint presentation for Spanish class! This is a really sweet combo between latin and some more electronica feeling. Nice work, and keep it up!
-SuperDrummer146
Dammit!
I'm sorry that I accidentaly zeroed your song. Please forgive me, my mouse seriously messed up really badly. I didn't mean to do it, you have my word. This is a totally awesome song, I made a big mistake though.
-Sorry that I did that, I'll try to get someone to fiven it.
-SuperDrummer146
Haha, your talking to a guy who doesn't give a shit about scores :)
Don't let it bother you.
Nice!
Pretty sweet song, it was kinda basic, but it was awesomeness anyways. Great dynamics contrast! The voice effect was kinda wierd, it didn't fit with the song entirely too well. The main synth was great. You need a better backdrop to the main song, more stuff behind it, ya know? The drum beats are killer!
-Overall, a nice song! Check out my song TRS-Marimba Mania!, it's even better than TJS-Latino Casino!
-SuperDrummer146
Well...
...both your first one and this one kinda sound the same, but the beginnings are slightly different, and this one has more character. The drums seem out of place without a little more going on with it. It does kinda remind you of a sacraficing though, which is pretty cool (Inca, Aztecs or one of those tribes?).
-The song is themed nicely. Good job! Check out some of my techno songs and rate them, you're bound to like them!
-SuperDrummer146
sweetness dude, thanks. I'll be sure to check them out when I get the chance^_^
-SD-
Nice!!!
Pretty sweet. I like your instrument melodies and the such. The drum beats are awesome, but the choice of types of drums could be done better. Otherwise, this is just phenomenal. I enjoyed it!
-Check out some of my techno and fiven it, you're bound to like it!
-SuperDrummer146
I fivened your stuff :D
Yeah, you're getting better.
You just have to keep working at it. Listen to any music you like, you'll pick up a thing or two there. If you have no idea of music theory/structure, it's kinda hard to make your own stuff. So yeah, keep working at it, and check out some of my techno mixes!
-SuperDrummer146
Haha dude, i do listen to everything. being broad minded makes it a right bastard to write anything.
Maybe i just have add, cos i cant concentrate for shit. who knows. cheers for the review tho, sure i'll check you out.
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