Alright...
-I'm actually going to give you a good, solid review, which I do not so frequently, since I'm lazy (bad SuperDrummer146!), but ya know, here it goes!
-The happy hardcore thing is an interesting idea. It's got brightness, but the way you presented it, it had brightness, depth, and style. It was really fun to watch it build up to something pretty tight, you got more complicated as the song progressed. At the beginning, in that repeated section of the first groove, but then where it got quiet for the buildup, you might want to think about turning down the high-pitched synth there for the purpose of clarity and some killer dynamic contrast.
You really should take time to progress this song even further, like 3-4 minutes. By seeing what you've done so far, you can really make this a totally PoWnAgE song. Seriously, it would be great with a bridge, and other stuff. So keep it up, challenge yourself daily, and do you best!
-SuperDrummer146