itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[SpK*) - Brick Type]

Wow!!!

I really like this track, it just seems really cool. I don't think the melody is audible enough though, tune that up, but otherwise, this is a really kickin' song : )

-SuperDrummer146

Check my newest audio, "Dreamerz: Falling Into Time"

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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[Death On A Snowfield (Loop)]

I vote five anyways : )

Okay, I'll give you an honest review, you have potential!

Originality: Very nicely done piece, I felt it was original because of the feeling, it's there = 0

Diversity: Your melody it just a little too simple, slightly more complex, otherwise nice. Dynamics need to be added along with percussion if you really want to express the true feeling that can come out of this.

Clarity: Vocals a little too overpowering. Add strings and set the vocals at lower volume along with the same volume for strings. This could bring out some nicer moments within the loop.

Effort: You CAN do it!!! I know you can, just keep at it my friend : )

\m/_SuperDrummer146_\m/

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Falling Into Time"

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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theinfernumflame responds:

Oddly, after I submitted it I had the same thoughts (turn down vocals, add strings). I put it together in an hour, though, and I plan to use it as part of something eventually, so it's mainly just an idea. I will make some changes though.

[{Ser Attone}]

Hmm...

You're almost there, just use some better heavy metal drum sounds. Ask around the heavy metal people, they would know best ; )

-Nice little riff, very enjoyable!

-SuperDrummer146-

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Falling Into Time"

The-Eastern-Front responds:

thanks, ill do that,i am a fl studio drum n00b, so thats probably why it sucked

[Car Commercial BG Jam]

Lolz!!!

Car commercial it is within the melody, but the drum beat, it's good for the beginning, but then after that, you should switch the beat to make it more flowing, or kinda a progressive rock beat, that would nicely kick things up a knotch!

-coolness : )

-SuperDrummer146

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Syntrus responds:

indeed

[{Firestorm}]

Very nice!!!

A little different than your norm, but I wouldn't say it's a big stretch or anything. Cool either way, like a super high quality song that makes me want to headbang : )

-Cool!

-SuperDrummer146-

-By the way, I've got a new ambient song out, check it! Dreamerz: Fading Into Time Itself.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=620
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[Sweay]

Very nice!!!

-It was music to my ears, quite literally I might add. I dunno what to say, music is how you want to make it, so at least make it great (which is what you did). Keep at it man, this really is some killer stuff!

-SuperDrummer146

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"

Torkey responds:

Thanks SuperDrummer146 , im looking forward to making more music in the future, thanks for the review again!

[Star Wars: Cantina (of Fear!)]

Hmm...

Originality: It's not really your melody or chords, but the way you worked the song into an entirely new composition is extremely noticed throughout this piece.

Diversity: Very nice song composition, you added a lot of great features, such as the beginning riff, and then transfering to heavy, and the slowing down ending was extremely cool with the killer FX too!

Clarity: Nice!

Effort: It's there by far!

-Wow, I'm pleased with the quality and care you put into this piece, it's takes a lot of discipline to actually complete a project of this capacity.

-SuperDrummer146

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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[At First Trance]

Nice!

You've got a slight, very slight, g-rave style in your music, but it sounds pretty nice, and you really know how to work your song titles nicely. Coolness!

-SuperDrummer146

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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Swift-Reason responds:

sweet. thanks for the review. i'll be checking your stuff out.

[//McC_; Chillout Type Thing.]

VERY NICE!!!

For a first song, it's not bad at all, the only thing is that I'm guessing that your using preset sounds and loops to make these, since some first song artists do that. If not, great job! If so, stay away from those, they don't help to express the feeling you want for the most part.

Very nice feeling song, it's chillaxing : )

-SuperDrummer146

-Check my audio too, drop a review, like on "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"

[Untitled Demo (High Quality)]

Nice chord progression!

Really enjoyable piece.

-Good diversity, lots of solo-ing, and good drum fills. Lots of nice FX.
-The chords made the song feel powerful the way it was set up.
-Clarity a little, just a little off. Probably my speakers though, I got a new desktop today.

nice

-SuperDrummer146

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall."

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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JesusSaves responds:

Thank you for the good review. Expect more songs like this over the next month or so.

I'll be sure to check out your stuff some time tommorow after school.

Thanks again,
-Steve