itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Big Boss Music (beta)]

Hmm...

Here's your only 2 problems...

The slow strings just don't flow, they don't overlap, they flip off one note, and flip on the next note, there's a slight delay from one note to the next. Also, it doesn't have the intensity of a boss battle. The right instruments so far, but I'm not scared. This is probably some puny boss. COME ON! I want to be afraid!

-Overall: Good solid effort, keep at this piece, don't give up. Work until it's truely done : )

-SuperDrummer146

-Check my audio! I recommend Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall

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XDragonslayerX responds:

Well if you want something stronger, email me at [e-mail] I know what you're wanting..perhaps i'll work on that..this song is more of a big powerful boss..kinda like in the final fantasy series..you see Kefka..FF3..you know he's big and bad yadda yadda..but anyway..listen to the music. thanks for the review man and i'll check out your stuff.

["Techno Maxation" - RD2010]

Wow!

Nice! You're seriously improving yourself. I've got Always In My Heart V2 and Plutonic "Harcore Beat" on my iPod, and they're good, but this is seriously you evolving to a newer level. Nice job! But don't stop. Keep raising your expectations. As soon as you get close to reaching them, set your goals higher. Keep at it man, you're really good!

-SuperDrummer146

Check my audio! I recommend "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"

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XayberOptix responds:

Thanks for listening! I'm glad to hear that my music has found a place in your iPod. :D That means a lot to me! If you want to hear the FINAL MIX of this tune, check it out at my other link: http://www.soundclick.com/xayberoptix

Thanks again for all the inspiration. OK, I'll check your tune out.

[Zelda-Links Awakening-Jenova]

Nice!

8-bit music rocks! Maybe remix it by having the 8-bit part, and then it builds with modern sound FX, and then the whole song goes techno/trance? Just and idea...

Nice!

SuperDrummer146

Check my audio! Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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[FiNiX Charmer]

Dude!

This is a very nice piece!

Very percussive : )
Nice Middle Eastern feeling : )
Tends to be offbeat : )
Isn't very full : (
-Yeah, make the song fuller. Pauses are cool, but they need at least a bass backup to make it sound good.

Good try, you're very good!

-SuperDrummer146

Check my audio!

Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1554346&sub=569
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Fiven!

SirFiNiX responds:

hmm... Thanks! I'll try to work on that with future pieces.

[[[=Epic (Not Yet Finished)=]]]

Hmm...

Nice composition : )
Great sounds : )
Ending was okay : |

I guess if you REALLY want a better ending, what would be cool is if you built the song up so intense, with lots of action, and then stopped it. And you could easily add the intense moment and just string it right onto this, and it would song extremely cool.

Kinda like this song?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1554346&sub=569
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Hope I could help : )

-SuperDrummer146

Check my audio!

Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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Nostrap responds:

Thanks for the idea. I will definitely check out your audio :).
Ya basically I'm thinking there are two options as to where the song can go. Either i can keep on building it until it gets to the climax and I have to end it or I can stop it before it peaks and then go into a softer ballad portion.
I really appreciate the review. Thanks for your time.

[DJ Comet-The Offset]

lol

I love how you call the song "The Offset", and the beat is purposely offset from the bass line for a while. Nice melody too, but it doesn't seem to fufill itself, but either way, it's still implanted in my head, so you've done a great job!

Nice!

-SuperDrummer146

-Check my audio!

Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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[HappyJoyJoy REMIX]

Hmm...strange?

Yes, this is extremely wierd, but it's a nice piece. Maybe work on your mixing and the sound FX could be more present.

Good try!

-SuperDrummer146

Check my audio!

Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall

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KillaJo responds:

Thx! I will start to 'work' on the FX... Really. I will...!!!
Thanks for the review!!!

'KillaJo'

[Carol of the Bells D'n'b remix]

WOW!

Dude! This insanely rocks! First of all, you were successfully able to use multiple time signatures, you made it sound professional, and you've made a great remix. Nice!

-SuperDrummer146

Check my audio! Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall

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[Dzex - Trains in Perspective]

Nice!

Kinda like g-rave and -zenon- put together. I can't say too much on this, just keep changing it up man!

-SuperDrummer146

Check my audio!

Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall

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[Beyond Sacrifice]

Evaluation...Start!!!

Originality: It seems to have great influences from some of the more modern heavy metal of today. A nice, calm start with clean guitar, and strings, followed by a reverse cybmal build that was executed very nicely. And right there, we hear the heavy part. It's very nice, but the transition at 1:15 into the song wasn't great. It didn't have the intense pickup like at 0:48 into the song. When picking up back into the song with a transition, it's probably better to make the pickup more intense and well thoughtout.

Diversity: It's kinda like every other heavy metal song out there. Try some new stuff, perhaps? You'll never know what could happen until you add new things, try new things, and experiment with new things.

Clarity: Extremely professional, nice job : )

Effort: You took your time with this, but just keep checking your song, being meticulous with attention to every detail.

Nice Job!

-SuperDrummer146

Check my audio!

Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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