itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJSV - Snow Palace]

Sweet!

This is what the VG music section was made for! Tight stuff like this! Maybe add some sound FX into the song for the feel of a snow palace? Nice!

-ImperfectDisciple-

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"

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[Air Stage]

Kinda poppy and fun!

Nice little VG feel as a blast from the past retro style, really tight stuff. Did you use MIDI charts? If so, maybe try your own version : D

-Tight!

-ImperfectDisciple-

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall."

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DarkValentine responds:

thanks ^_^. I like to keep some things retro, and close to the originals as possible. I'll definately give your page a look at.

i'm an old schooler, and trying to keep it live is what i do best ;)

[_-[Creep]-_]

Fun!

Has a cartoon-ish haunted house feel, which is a beauty in itself : D

-Maybe some detuned backround strings, or some sound FX would add to the creepiness of the song?

Very nice : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall" (only 3 or so more d-loads 'till a gold track : D)

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[Another Rainy Day]

Very nice!

I saw a rainy day underwater, where the drops of liquid pummel into the thin layer of the lake, but the drops are sucked into the lake to be taken away later.

Very nice song, the melody synth was weird at times with how it came in, maybe tune in some dynamics, like a drop in volume at the end of the phrase to add a sense of finishing a sentence from the story, then continuing onward.

-Great!

-ImperfectDisciple-

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall" (only 3 or so more d-loads 'till a gold track : D)

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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[Mind Distortion]

YAY!!!

Great use of a hard kick drum, it's perfect for the mood of the song. Make a melody though, you've got that one riff, and that's it, expand the idea of what you've got so far. You've got some nice FX and stuff, just make a melody. Either that, or this. Do you have Fruity Loops? I use Fruity Loops, and I'm pretty good with melodies : D

-Either way, nice ; )

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall." (Only 4 or so downloads from 500 : D )

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Darkstalker-X responds:

Alrighty. thanks for the comment :D.

Yeah I use that software too, it's one of the few good music makers around :P.

[Amorosity]

Fairly tight!

I'm guessing you use Fruity Loops to make your music? Really cool man, good driving force of the song, I can really see you getting better at this as long as you try hard for it : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall." (Only 4 or so downloads from 500 : D )

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chromic responds:

I like the way you make your music. thanks for the review, I'll be sure to look at more of your music soon. ^^

[S1GG - Bridge Zone]

Sounds pretty tight : D

The major sound is relaxing and fun, very much enjoyable. What program do you use? Nice ; )

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall." (Only 4 or so downloads from 500 : D )

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mikeblastdude7 responds:

Thanks! I use FL Studio.

I checked out your audio, pretty good stuff. :D

[Flying Fox Tripping.]

Hmm...

The trippyness is pretty insane, though I don't recommend it too much on the claps, unless you hit 2 and 4 of a four bar beat, and then add extra offbeat claps from there : D

-Nice song, pretty tight!

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall."

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=573
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[God Rest Ye Merry Gentlemen]

A soothing rendition!

Felt calming and just great, I wish I could play piano this well. The phrasing is different. The strings don't sound entirely too good with the song. Maybe not the strings themselves, but some of the chords are weird, might have been intentional, but it's just not right I guess. Maybe just a flute countermelody and a viola or cello harmonic would suit a little better. It would help the feeling you've created within this piece : D

-Great job man, I like it, just use that advice, and set sail : D

-ImperfectDisciple-

Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall."

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Quickbeam responds:

Thanks for the review. And i have already voted, downloaded and reviewed that song many times. Some were one alt accounts.

[The Hero's Requiem]

Cool Progression!

The way the song evolves is just perplexing and quite enjoyable. It changes up constantly and keeps the listener hooked it. The drum samples at the sped up part is kinda generic, but nothing too bad : P

Very nice job : D

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Stratoavis responds:

It took me a long time to fit that piano in there ever since I developed it out of nowhere! But I figured i'd mix it up with different movements. Glad you liked it though! ^_^