Amazing leads really!
I think that the leads are great, but the drums definitely need work! They don't sound in character with the rest of the song, it's out of place. Kinda like this, you wouldn't normally find oranges on an apple tree now would you? (i'd hope not anyways :P) Make the drums fit in with the rest of the song, and experiment, it's take a little bit, but I'm sure there's a way you can do that ;)
-ImperfectDisciple
I think what you meant is the drums are a bit too... Dance-y if I may? I see what you mean, though. I probably should have gone for more of a sub-bass.
What I SHOULD do is get the full version and save my projects so I can fix them if need be. But that's several hundred dollars that I don't have >:-C
P.S. You can see oranges on apple trees if you do acid. I promise. You'll probably see pears, too. Except they'll be sexy women pears. And if it's a bad trip, they eat you alive after tying you down.
The only difference with me is that the above scenario is normal WITHOUT acid.
so i'm writing this review in lowercase letters
because you deserve a zero for stealing all my happiness and putting it in this song! lol, jk.
it's a start, but there's some mixing problems still. i'm going to be a jerk and say nothing on the matter, and maybe you could figure out, but you're on your way, that's for sure, keep it up!
-imperfectdisciple (the one and only time without capital letter's :p)
-please check my music if you could :)
kk man thanks alot for the review =D
What he said!
That's all you'd need to do. The mix itself is a bit loud as well, but in either case, those are some sweet synths!!!
-Maybe sit down with this track and figure out (between EQ'ing and volume and such) the best sound for the drums. It takes trial and error, but it's worth it to get the right sound. With awesome synth-worth like that, you'd benefit from working on that ;)
-ImperfectDisciple
-Care to check out my newest track? http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/153331
-Thanks if you can! If not, oh well, it's cool.
hey ive heard your music before and its really good ill give you a review.and thanks for the comments im glad that you liked it
Keep working on it!
Sure, this isn't the most amazing song yet, but those tutorials must have helped, this isn't bad for a first time in FL Studio. A nice thing to look into would be EQ'ing since that would help balance your sound a little more. For example, the bass drum is a bit too distorted. The bass synth is brilliant. Compositionally, this isn't bad. I mean, it doesn't change chords or anything, but as a background track, this is pretty sweet.
-The only way to get better is to keep practicing and listen to a lot of different types of music :D You are really on your way if you do that!
-ImperfectDisciple
P.S. Could you check out a new track I just made at http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/153331?
Thanks for the input, btw I couldn't find that track of yours, was it deleted?
Appreciate it.
-Pants
Good and all, but...
The song doesn't go anywhere. There isn't any dynamic change. It needs to go somewhere, move to something idea wise. Visualize a story of some sort and create the track around that. We don't need to see the same backdrop with the same chase scene, in the same direction the whole time. Add something more!
-ImperfectDisciple
Yeah, I see what you mean. I'll try to do that on the next song I make. Fortunately, visualizing is something I'm good at, so I hope I can do it well enough!
I'd give you some reviews, but I got banned from reviewing for a few months...
NICE!!!
I've heard a remix of this before, but I like your style of mixing and your synth choice, it's very full and deep, almost reminds me of 8-bit on steroids, good stuff mate!
-Please check out my music as well, especially this one, http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/153331.
-ImperfectDisciple
Thanks mate, i worked pretty hard on this song in terms of mixing.
I'll be sure to review some of your music.
Uh oh...LOL
Catchy for sure, I am that kid, but i'm not fat, lol.
-Awesome stuff, though I think the drums could stand to have a fuller sound.
-If you'd like, please check out my newest song, http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/153331.
-ImperfectDisciple
Sounds a bit outta pitch, but...
Overall, not bad, nice guitar work. Your vocal test is a GO GO GO!!!
-Please check out my newest song, http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/153331, if you'd like :)
-ImperfectDisciple
Thank you for the comparison rating, BTW I didn't do any of the music, I just sung to Soldier Side by SOAD and uploaded it to ask for a comparison by everyone. Thanks for the comparison anyways. I was very nervous uploading this. I figured I was gonna get 2's and 0's. Thanks!
Repetitive, but...
That's an awesome sound. Yes, I can hear a couple of things that could be fixed, and I'm sure you know them already, but this is great. Not too overpowering, nicely balanced, it's like candy, and candy is good :P
-ImperfectDisciple
P.S. At 2:43, extend that bass drop effect into the next phrase while fading out at the same time? It's really nice, and it fills the frequency spectrum in a really nice way :D
Haha!
I remember this song now, it was the inspiration for me beatboxing crazy synths like yours, with that small glitch and all. It adds flavor to mah beatboxing, thanks!
-ImperfectDisciple
ImperfectDisciple-Re cording the world one track at a time.
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