Whoa!
You've gotten much better since a couple of years of ago. Nice bass btw, it kicks really nicely. Maybe a bit too much high end, it sizzle a little too much in the ears, but otherwise, really wicked.
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-Check this theme I wrote...
yeah big time, my stuff from the last year or so I wouldn't be afraid to show as samples for a record deal :P
Sweet.
Sounds really cool, repetitive, but has a good sound to it. About 1:08, that synth comes in, that does the flute in the real song, it needs a faster attack, it feels too delayed. Otherwise, sweet!
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Thanks man, did you know that its only a string sound at 1:08, it just sounds like that coz its all wierd attack and cut off.
Isn't it the guitar that plays that part in the song as well?
Good.
The drums had a weird attack to them though. Like, when the drums stop, and then start up again, right when they start, the sound almost gives me the impression that there was a clip and it went down like it wasn't there. Idk, probably just me and my dang headphones, lol..
-Nice sound, creates a mood.
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The firefight break can seem a little abrupt if you aren't used to it. Try it on your stereo, though. :D
Go look up...
"Venetian Snares" (if the spelling is wrong, sorry). They are a DnB group of some sort, and they do all sorts of DnB, you might draw some inspiration from them.
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This is a remix of Venetian Snares' "More Drug And Bass", off of his album 7 sevens .md
Short but sweet!
The drums are a bit weird, but I understand you're just getting used to FL, that's fine.
-Fine job on this, very melodical and moving piece despite the length :)
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-Feel free to check my submission that made the top 5 for the week, Trippicrunched Christmas.
I heard your piece, I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Much better than this, in my opinion. :)
Good, but...
...needs a punk singer instead :P
-Nice idea though! Check out my song Trippicrunched Christmas, I wanted to play a mellower version of it in church, but I totally forgot about asking the church about it ;p
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Oh yeah... I was trying to keep it carol-y while giving some punkitude. Besides,... Pop-punk is still punkish... ew...
The misfits don't have a "punk" singer if you think about it, but they rock awesome still.
Very wholesome
It has a nice, full sound to it despite being 8-bit, which is really nice. The nintendo FX are also much welcomed :)
-Sweet, again, good luck in the contest, I definitely think this has some contention in there :)
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Yep.. I did like how it turned out. It was interesting putting together the "percussion" part.. considering the original song has none, but the Nintendo FX fits in well there.
I don't have much experience with 8-bit, but I had fun making this and will probably play around a bit more with it in the future.
Thanks for the review! And ya, good luck again!
Needs some more musical dynamics!
Like, buildups and mellowing down, making the song flow. For example, that kick drum can get really annoying if it's droning on for close to all of the the song. I found that I liked the beginning, then the middle seemed like the beginning repeated over again. The ending was very mellow, and maybe the middle could have used some of that feeling to contrast with the more upbeat parts.
-Not bad though, just needs some polishing :)
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I'm a bit confused but ok. I did cut off about 1 minute from the original but....
Thanks for the review
SNAP!!!
It's super catchy and got me groovin', nice dude! I especially like the small builds. Maybe you could extend the song?
-Yeah, Crystal meth...ermm...the Crystal VST rocks!
-And really, i hate drugs, they tend to kill :\
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ImperfectDisciple-Re cording the world one track at a time.
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