itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[{Serenity}]

Vocals?

That would be cool, ambient vocals.

-ImperfectDisciple

dj-skeetskeet-69 responds:

hehe i don't sing or know of anyone who could help out with that
so no vocals for now
thanks for the review though =)

[Diablo - Tristram Village -r]

Hey, your still alive!

What's up? Sweet song, sounds pretty freaky, I'm not going to lie, though with some ambient FX, that would just make this song so beast :P

-ImpefectDisciple

Rawrthaas responds:

heeey!

alive and well haha. thanks for the review :D

[FoD Drum Challenge Entry]

lol

Kinda simple and repetitive with the "drums", but that extra bass synth is kinda cool :P

-ImperfectDisciple

P.S. I'm in the contest too! check my submission at http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/153331

TheDeadMan69 responds:

yeah, i know it was pretty crappy, but in my defense.......i got nothin, but ill check yours out as well.

Btw, about the bass line, when you got it, didnt it sound like it was missing bass?

Keepin it Grounds,
-The Dead Man

PS: Check out my other stuff. You scratch my back, ill jizz on yours, lmao

[Faceman Theme Song]

please...

those vocal blips before the singing is REALLY annoying, it's not even musical!!!

-besides that, sweet.

HyruleanHyroe responds:

The doo-wops? We thought they were funny. I'm sorry you didn't like them, but glad you liked the rest!

[The FoD Challenge]

Sweet!

You used some of the same ideas that I had in my submission as well (the volume cuts especially). Nice ending too, although the drums are repetitive the whole way through.

-ImperfectDisciple

-Please check my submission for the contest, "Beginning Today-Shifty Mix"

MC-Q responds:

HELL YEA!!!!
Our projects are almost similar, well im not good at this producing thing but maybe we can collab since we both have similar ideas ^.^

[[DG] -FoD Drum Thing-]

Consistent

Though I wish it could have been crazier, this wasn't bad. Though the beat stayed around the same pattern, it had dynamics, and tricked me a couple of times. The ending was a bit of a letdown though :(

-Not bad overall!

-ImperfectDisciple

-Please check out my submission to the contest, "Beginning Today-Shifty Mix"

DzGuy responds:

lol I gave you a review before I responded to yours. Thanks for crticism. :)

[The faceoff {X-is-Trance}]

Amazing leads really!

I think that the leads are great, but the drums definitely need work! They don't sound in character with the rest of the song, it's out of place. Kinda like this, you wouldn't normally find oranges on an apple tree now would you? (i'd hope not anyways :P) Make the drums fit in with the rest of the song, and experiment, it's take a little bit, but I'm sure there's a way you can do that ;)

-ImperfectDisciple

Death-9 responds:

I think what you meant is the drums are a bit too... Dance-y if I may? I see what you mean, though. I probably should have gone for more of a sub-bass.

What I SHOULD do is get the full version and save my projects so I can fix them if need be. But that's several hundred dollars that I don't have >:-C

P.S. You can see oranges on apple trees if you do acid. I promise. You'll probably see pears, too. Except they'll be sexy women pears. And if it's a bad trip, they eat you alive after tying you down.

The only difference with me is that the above scenario is normal WITHOUT acid.

[[f] Adictivness..]

so i'm writing this review in lowercase letters

because you deserve a zero for stealing all my happiness and putting it in this song! lol, jk.

it's a start, but there's some mixing problems still. i'm going to be a jerk and say nothing on the matter, and maybe you could figure out, but you're on your way, that's for sure, keep it up!

-imperfectdisciple (the one and only time without capital letter's :p)

-please check my music if you could :)

fuffka responds:

kk man thanks alot for the review =D

[TwilightTrance]

What he said!

That's all you'd need to do. The mix itself is a bit loud as well, but in either case, those are some sweet synths!!!

-Maybe sit down with this track and figure out (between EQ'ing and volume and such) the best sound for the drums. It takes trial and error, but it's worth it to get the right sound. With awesome synth-worth like that, you'd benefit from working on that ;)

-ImperfectDisciple

-Care to check out my newest track? http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/153331

-Thanks if you can! If not, oh well, it's cool.

AfroLegend responds:

hey ive heard your music before and its really good ill give you a review.and thanks for the comments im glad that you liked it

[Rogue System]

Keep working on it!

Sure, this isn't the most amazing song yet, but those tutorials must have helped, this isn't bad for a first time in FL Studio. A nice thing to look into would be EQ'ing since that would help balance your sound a little more. For example, the bass drum is a bit too distorted. The bass synth is brilliant. Compositionally, this isn't bad. I mean, it doesn't change chords or anything, but as a background track, this is pretty sweet.

-The only way to get better is to keep practicing and listen to a lot of different types of music :D You are really on your way if you do that!

-ImperfectDisciple

P.S. Could you check out a new track I just made at http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/153331?

Musical-Pants responds:

Thanks for the input, btw I couldn't find that track of yours, was it deleted?
Appreciate it.

-Pants