itsameyayo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~On-yX~ Tension]

Nice

Very cool, like the drumbeat, fairly simple. It'd be nice if there was more to the loop, but it's cool. You're starting to learn how to use those effects, so that's nice to hear of :D

-ImperfectDisciple

On-yX responds:

Told ya I'm getting serious, I'm not messing about anymore.

Lets see what I can do!

[Sesame Street (metalized)]

Awesome Beginning!

Oh my gosh, that was hilarious. "We leave this one up to Bad-Man," HA!

-Sounds good though, it could be extended more, but it's a theme, not a full song, right?

-Fricken' tight man, I gotta show my friends :D

-ImperfectDisciple

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

hahaha, glad you liked it, man! Yeah just wankin around. I miss doing some vocal acting tho.

[Flounder]

Very Yummy!

The beat is really nice, it's got a nice groove. The strings are just a tad heavy, but with all the other strings, it's a nice blend. Some really nice ambient FX, maybe a breakdown of them at one point as a bridge would be cool, but that would ruin the calming feeling this song has, so it would be better to just leave as is, no?

-Just an extremely awesome job, a sure d-load (hasn't happened for a while with me).

-ImperfectDisciple

-Mind checking my Rock Out audio submission?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=821
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[Rucklo - Schiz]

:D

Ah-ha! I remember this old song, very catchy little synth there, the poppy high one. The beginning really doesn't suit me, at least with the bass drum entrance. The ambient beginning was nice, but the transfer from the absence of drums to having them could have been smoothed out, planned a little better. After the beginning, it's a nice ride, quite enjoyable. Nice riff all throughout, and the song is really easy to listen to without getting bored (trust me, there's those songs that have high quality sound, but not high quality music, really crappy :P). Awesome, it's really nice!

-ImperfectDisciple

-Mind checking out my premiere for the Rock Out Contest, rate, drop a review?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995&sub=821
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[<R+> 3.0.8]

More like 150-300 bpm!

There's that more triplet feeling part, and it's also halftime. Pretty sweet track, way DDR-esque. Love that game :)

-Nice.

-ImperfectDisciple-

[_-={This Frozen Land}=-_]

Pretty tight, not the best thing for flying...

...but it's enjoyable none the less.

-Whenever you have that piano only break, make it reeverb and/or have a more gliding and fluent tone, this is supposed to be flying, it needs to fly smoothly and not go through turbulence. Keep that a common theme with background-ish stuff.

-Sleigh bells, a nice add, but needs to be softer. It sticks out like a nerd at the fashion convention, it doesn't work until the nerd becomes cool, make the nerd cool (or just soften the sleigh bells, your choice :P)

-Overall, very nice, loved the flute, ocarina, and vox!

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my newest piece!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995

MaestroRage responds:

Thanks for the review Imperfect, it's been a very long time man, how you been ^^?

The Sleigh bells were a tad loud weren't they? Oh well, it's not worth a resubmit for just that, if too many people claim the same thing, then I guess I would have to :D.

I'll drop by your page as soon as I have the time Imperfect, I promise, if I don't get to your song in 3 days, please drop me a pm, I do tend to forget tasks in the shuffle of the day.

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked the piece ^^.

[_-_THIS IS SPARTA_-_(Preview)]

Your kick drum is weird...

At the beginning, that tom thing needs some OMPH! Make is bassy, and add some reeverb, make it sounds like it means it.

-You also need a bass part. You're song is extremely treble (high-note focused), but you need a bass back beat. Maybe some low string chords. Either that, or I can't hear them. Do you use FL Studio? I could help yah out and show you what I mean.

-There are certain elements to songs that you need, and this bass spectrum of the song is needed. It doesn't have to come immediately, but probably with this kinda piece, it needs to build all the way through.

So the roadmap of the song would be soft to loud. Make it epic! With that hip hop sound and the classical meshed together to create a fine sound.

-Like I said, if you want an example, I'd be glad to help yah out. Just drop me a note at my email...

[e-mail]

-Good start though, seems to be going somewhere, but it isn't finished just yet!

-ImperfectDisciple-

-Check my music?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1184995

[Silent Star]

Spooky...

The overall sound makes it spooky. This would be more in the ambient genre than DnB. But either way, the bass drum was distorted, and that's because it's either too loud or you have a distortion effect on it. Make it more blended into the song, maybe by making it sound like a heartbeat, and take out the distortion, it pierces through the song too much. XD, nice, I'm gonna PM you about something.

Check out my music too :D

-ImperfectDisciple-

[Chiron- Four times Perfection]

Hmm...zorz....

It seems like you could have developed the song to be a better ambient piece than trance. The drums didn't really have a lasting appeal. Nor did the song go too much of anywhere. The overall feeling was nice though. It built slightly, but nothing really much. Well, whatever, maybe it's opinion, maybe it's fact, but either way, I can say with absolute confidence that the synths are awesome. Nice :D

-ImperfectDisciple-

BMC-Audio responds:

"zorz"? lol

wasnt any drums in here, so i dont know what you meant about their lasting appeal. I know the song didnt go anywhere, i just wanted it to be a kind of relaxing almost loop, i guess i could have made it into a full song. thanks for the review! i love your music hehe