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Pretty sweet

The frequency hops were kinda weird, but not bad. I felt like this was unique in it's style, but needed more drums (it is a drum challenge, right?), but either way, you left parts to build up, so that's not a bad choice.

Please check my submission for the contest at http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/153331

-And nice btw ;)

-ImperfectDisciple

Hmm...

If there was more variation in the melody and the different harmonies/chords, I believe that hip-hop would actually sound good, you are on to something ;)

-ImperfectDisciple

flashmac responds:

I take it your not a big fan of hip hop and what you said makes sense. I'm glad you some what liked it though =D

lol

that made me laugh cause of how insane it was. The ending beats were much better though, the hardcore drums didn't float my boat for some reason :P

-ImperfectDisciple

um...

I hear no vocals :(

-Nice mix though! Very groovy.

-ImperfectDisciple

haha

I play piano the same exact way. I taught myself, and then I wing it, I can't read piano music, I just go from whatever whim I'm floating towards :P

-ImperfectDisciple

DjGamah responds:

It works, eh? :P

Nice, needs minor improvement.

-EQ'ing on the piano could be better. The high frequency end of the piano can be taken down to allow room for other instruments like the high strings and other sound effects. After that boost the high end of the electro strings and some of the higher instruments, it would give this work a little more atmosphere.

-ImperfectDisciple

mjattie responds:

I'll look at it :), tx for review

Alright, alright

Seems like the bass drum is a bit whiny (on the high end of things). There's a lot of good things coming from the high frequency spectrum, take those high frequencies down on the bass drum and add a small dose of low frequencies (suggestion on the 40hz-120hz range, and then cut the 0hz-40hz down, but not all the way, just enough so it's much lower than the other bass drum frequencies).

-Sweet synths, they are like candy.

-ImperfectDisciple

Opinions?

Lol, alright, I'm not the best in the world at those, but on the mix, I can certainly be of assistance.

-The first hi-hat (16th note) sound that comes out is way tinny, get rid of the mid frequencies on that one.

-Some of the vocals are a bit hard to understand with the lyrics, possibly make those stronger? Vocals usually run into the mid range the most, so if there are instruments distracting that, find a way to mesh those vocals in so they are clear and can be heard and that the rest of the song is still present, but underlying.
-The first set of vocals are an exception, very nice on those! It's when the accompaniment (bass, drums, background synths) kicks in where the vocals are hard to hear. I must say, however, that the accompaniment is really nice, driving, and very meaty, keep that!

-That's all I've got right now, good luck with the contest!

-ImperfectDisciple

Rig responds:

Yeah, there are problems with the mix, mostly because I'm using cheap headphones. I tried to compensate, but there will be problems. :P

Thanks for the advice though, once I get back to my speakers I'll take it into account.

Not bad

-I felt like the song was very unique in it's writing, and it really shows in this song, I haven't been lucky enough to hear good stuff like this from Newgrounds, but the mixing/producing on this work is really muddled to my ears. The singing is great, but it isn't fit into the song right, especially with the bassy accompaniment. The singing feels a bit too bassy as well, and with a voice that high, it shouldn't be that way. In either case, whether I'm right or wrong, make sure that certain frequencies fit where they need to through EQ'ing.

-ImperfectDisciple

MaestroRage responds:

MaestroRage:
Thank you for your very insightful review ID. I knew that the EQ'ing for this song was horribly off, it kept bugging me and bugging me... but sadly as you listen to a song more and more, the flaws and faults dull to your ears in time. It didn't help that my headphones weren't built for this degree of bass, and the new headphones I ordered are like 2 weeks overdue.

It's not me trying to justify my flaws, but i'm glad i'm not the only one who thought that. Thank you for your honesty, truly, it helped!

Ah pity

I gave you a five and the score goes down (by - 0.0000020, oh no! lol).

-Nice, sounds awesome!

-ImperfectDisciple

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