Opinions?
Lol, alright, I'm not the best in the world at those, but on the mix, I can certainly be of assistance.
-The first hi-hat (16th note) sound that comes out is way tinny, get rid of the mid frequencies on that one.
-Some of the vocals are a bit hard to understand with the lyrics, possibly make those stronger? Vocals usually run into the mid range the most, so if there are instruments distracting that, find a way to mesh those vocals in so they are clear and can be heard and that the rest of the song is still present, but underlying.
-The first set of vocals are an exception, very nice on those! It's when the accompaniment (bass, drums, background synths) kicks in where the vocals are hard to hear. I must say, however, that the accompaniment is really nice, driving, and very meaty, keep that!
-That's all I've got right now, good luck with the contest!
-ImperfectDisciple