\m/_YEAH!!!_\m/
Wow, you're getting much better, here's some more things to think about.
-Nice solo melody, truly impressive
-Make the piano feel more dance-like, with more than just whole notes, make it busier by hitting down the same chord more than once in the groove time it has. I really don't know how to explain it too well, make it groove better!
-Dude, you're improving at high rates of speed, only other thing that kinda irked me was that the solo instrument wasn't sustained enough, and it didn't say around long enough, as soon as you put that solo thing in, let it go through to the end of the song. Maybe at the point you ended the solo, make that synth take the place of the piano in chords, and let the piano rip it : D
-SuperDrummer146-