itsameyayo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sounds of CS]

Sweet!

Graphics-Stick figures and guns were drawn with greatness. Guns moved in an accurate way. The backrounds were of medium quality, but that can slide since you were trying to portray CS. It could have been better though.

Style: Slightly repetitive, using different angles of the stick-figure using the gun would have helped. I'm not sure on this, but after the scene where they use silencers, and then used normal guns again, I believe I saw you use a silenced gun or a RPG with a sniper sound. The grenade-throwing animation could be timed better with the sounds. It slowed down in two specific areas badly no matter what I did. But all of this was still not enough to ruin a great concept.

Sound-It rocketh!!!

-Besides that, it would be better if more variety was induced. Otherwise, that was killer to listen to.

Violence-It was there, but you didn't need to use hard-core violence.

Int. and Humor-n/a

Overall: Great work. You seem to really got talent for mixing those sounds. Hope to see more from you.

StealthBeast responds:

Medium quality? they are actual ingame screenshots of cs:s, not to mention with all settings to to the highest. how could they have been more accurate?

yeah i know, repetative lol

Thanks for the review

[Sonic Test]

Yes!!!

Could have been better, but I really loved this. Here's a breakdown on the ratings.

Graphics: It seemed like it was recorded with a video cam, as it was blocky on the screen a lot. The characters, wow, I don't know what you did, but the characters are just phenomenal, how they're drawn. Backrounds need more attention, however.

-I think the best drawn character(s) were the robots.

Style: Great animation, keep me interested the whole time, though it would be cool to see you come up with a Sonic story line or something.

Sound: Great, though I have to say Sonic sounded Link...

Violence: I liked how he blazed through the blimp and took it down, that was great!

Interactivity and Humor- n/a

Overall: Greatness, keep working at it, you're sure to be great!

[DBZ: Bojack Vs Garlic Jr.]

Nice!

You're pretty awesome with sprites, keep workin' at it man. Here's some pointers on my ratings.

Graphics-Killer! Though you do need to improve on sprite explosions and the movement of the characters at high speeds, it didn't have that DBZ feel to it.

Style-Good storyline, but first of all, it was too short. This was just an experimentation, I know, but always remember to extend your plot further. Also, the storyline has to have more feel to it, such as the dialouge. It had no sound, which was a downer. Try your best to animate mouths (I've seen that black mouths usually work best if you can't sprite the mouths), but if for some reason you can't make mouths, try having far views of them talking (like a sky cam and to the same effect of a horizontal view from the ground). I may not be a flash artist, but I've been around to get a rough idea of what works...

Sound-Cool fighting sound effects, they were killer! Try to find DBZ music and sound for dialouge.

Violence-Bravo, very well animated and it looked cool!

Interactivity and Humor-n/a

-You're really doing an outstanding job. Hope to see your DBZ sprite flashes take form and rule the portal : )

-SuperDrummer146

[Dreams Prologue]

Much improvement needed...

Graphics: Pretty good, although you could increase the framerate just a tad bit.

Style: Nice Storyline, flowed well.

Sound: An overall dissapointment. You need a WHOLE LOT more sound effects, the music alone just doesn't cut it. Here are some sounds that would need to be added.

-Explosions
-Talking
-Sword (taking out of sheeth, stabbing, etc.)

Please take more time to add sound effects, this put a big dent into your score.

Violence-It was in there, and animated okay.

Interactivity and Humor-n/a

Hope to see major improvements as the series goes on.

-SuperDrummer146

LordDF responds:

Thanks for the review. Sound would be nice, but I just don't have the sound resources to make it work right.

[Genevieve]

Nice job!

Graphics: Crude backrounds at a few points, but otherwise VERY detailed, especially the characters.

Style: Great storytime feel, very original.

Sound: Matching music for the overall mood of the story at their specific points. The narrator sounded aquward at times, but was otherwise very good.

Violence: Not much, whatever violence there was happened to help the story along.

Interactivity: n/a

Humor: Nice ironic ending : )

This is definitely a great movie, hope to see greater things come!

-SuperDrummer146

[Kirby's New Adventure]

Alrighty then...

You want contructive critisism, well here you have it!

Graphics-Not bad, though the animation could have flowed a little better.

Style-Kirby traveling to other places. Not bad, but this central plot got boring as the movie progressed.

Sound-Sounded nice, and it flowed alright, but at times, it was too soft. It would be nice if you credited your music as well.

Violence-Cartoony

Interactivity-n/a

Humor-Funny at times, this will come with practice.

In general, here are some pointers to make the flash better.

-Make a more exciting plot (Kirby was exploring a lot, try to expand on that, like one big long movie on one video games area, such as Legend of Zelda, Mario, etc.).
-Add sound effects with actions (Kirby sounds, like his "Hiiii" thingy, or him getting hit by the giant Mario bullet).
-Add attack animations for Kirby
-You had the preloader with the turtle. Don't have that on a separate page, then have the viewer press the play button again on another page. Incorporate the turtle into the Kirby page and make a Kirby preloader for that (and incorporate the turtle into your main page for the flash for you future flashes).

Hope I could help out. For a first sprite flash, that was pretty good. Keep working on it man, you're definitely doing great!

-SuperDrummer146

["The dismantled boy"]

Pretty good.

Can't wait for the English version!

Graphics-Suitable

Style-Nice, reflected the overall mood of the flash (from what I could understand).

Sound-The music fitted in with the style and graphics, and the narrating voice was suitable and easy to understand.

Violence-n/a

Interactivity-n/a

Humor-n/a

Good job, hope to see an English version sometime. Good luck on future productions : )

-SuperDrummer146

[Musicvideo "GodRestYe.."]

Alright...

I give you credit for that one. Not too bad, but not a revolution either. Here's some pointers on my scoring.

Graphics-Cartoony and decent, reflected the mood of the song.

Style-Really good, but you really to compile your flash more, if possible. It lagged on my computer at low quality, and I have a pretty good computer.

Sound-Christmas music just rocks!

Violence-n/a

Interactivity-n/a

Humor- A penguin and a dog? Interesting and humorous combonation.

-In general, you've got some work to do yet on this one. It has great possibility, but right now, it's mediocre. Add something more to it, like more animals playing different instuments, or pick a different Christmas song that has a variety of instuments to incorporate more animals. Or go outside your limits; try making your own varietied intrument Christmas music in order to incorporate more animals to play along.

-Either way, good effort, hope to see more from you : )

-SuperDrummer146